WORK WITH ME
Get my eyes on your pages.
Every day I read queries and manuscripts as a literary agent. When you book a review, I read yours the same way. Then I tell you, in plain words, what’s working and what to fix.
THE REVIEWS
Pick the review that fits where you are.
Each one comes with written notes from me. Before You Hit Send also comes with a 45-minute call.
MOST COMPLETE
Before You Hit Send
$1,425
I review your query letter, synopsis, and first ten pages. Then we meet for 45 minutes to talk it all through. Notes back within 30 working days.
YOUR QUERY
Query Letter Review
$250
Written notes on your query letter: what’s working, what’s getting in the way, and how to fix it. Back within 20 working days.
YOUR SYNOPSIS
Synopsis Review
$375
Written notes on your synopsis so it reads clearly from start to finish and shows the whole story.
HOW IT WORKS
Three steps, no guessing.
You’ll know what you’re getting and when you’re getting it.
These reviews are my own work, separate from Rosecliff Literary. A review isn’t a query, and it doesn’t put you in line for representation.
01 Book on my store
Pick your review and send your pages through the store.
02 I read your pages
I read them like they just landed in my inbox. Same eyes, same questions.
03 You get clear notes
What’s working, what’s getting in the way, and what to do next. With Before You Hit Send, we also meet for 45 minutes.
SPEAKING
Bring me to your conference or class.
I teach at writing conferences and online for groups of every size.
THE QUERY
Query Letters That Get Read
How agents read the inbox, and how to write a letter that makes us ask for pages.
THE PAGES
Your First Ten Pages
What I look for when I open your sample pages, and why so many stop me on page one.
THE PACKAGE
Synopsis, Comps, and the Full
The parts of querying writers dread, made simple, plus how I read a full manuscript.